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Fur Ferrari - Ted

9/5/2018

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Once upon a time, there was a greedy pig who wanted a Ferrari. Every day she would bug her mum and dad for a Ferrari. Her parents weren’t her real parents because she was adopted out at the age of 4 for continually begging for a Lamborghini. Every night she would think to herself, “But what colour should it be?”. The girl finally decided she wanted a fur covered Ferrari. She continually asked her parents and they also put her up for adoption. The girl stayed in the adoption centre for the rest of her life and never got her fur covered Ferrari.
                                                                 
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Terry Team 100WC England
9/13/2018 04:42:37 am

Hi Ted, what a selfish young girl you have written about in this 100WC. I liked your use of repetition to show her 'bugging' and that she got her just desserts!

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