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I want a goat - Jemima

8/16/2018

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Mum said I can’t get a pig, is that ok? I don’t want a pig I want a goat. My mum took me to two psychologists to talk about my pet issue, they always said, “why do you want it?” It didn’t do much. Everyone said I had problems. People think I banged my head when I was 2. Every day I put seed on the ground and walked around doing nothing. Mum got mad at me because I brought in rats. She made me stand at the door, she made me say this sentence, “why would I do that?”.
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Josh
8/23/2018 03:19:07 pm

what is wrong with a pig and that is good punctuiation

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Jemima
8/23/2018 06:22:54 pm

thank you. I Love goats better then pigs and it went well in my story.
i loved the way you told your 100 word story. it was one of the best story i have read. thank you and have a great year at school

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Bella
8/23/2018 06:37:08 pm

I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge I Loved how you included lots of subject very well done! Bye For Now!
- Bella

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Charlotte
8/23/2018 06:41:34 pm

Jemima I love the contents of your story and I can not wait to read more things that you will write. Great job again.

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