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The Letter-Aiden

8/22/2018

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When I heard the postman’s motorbike come past the house, I rushed out to the post box and saw a letter there. I took the letter out and it was addressed to me. I pulled a knife out of the drawer and cut the letter open. As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face. I had been invited to a Mad Hatter’s Tea Party in the botanical gardens. I looked at the date of the party and it said it was to start at 12o'clock. Now it was one! I ran out the door yelling to my mum, “I’m late, I’m late, for a very important date!” 
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Rachel O'Neill
8/27/2018 01:56:18 am

I liked the humour in this piece, Aiden. Hope your character got to the end of the tea party at least. Your writing has good pace.

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