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The Letter - Jack H

8/23/2018

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“No!” I screamed, as I crossed the finish line. He beat me by a millisecond in the men’s 100 metres in the Olympics. I sat down in despair on the side of the track.
“How?! A millisecond, only a millisecond,” I thought. I was sure I would win; I had trained so hard.
When I got back to the hotel that I was staying in, a letter dropped through the door. As I read the contents of the letter I was aware of the smile on my face; the winner had used drugs to win! I won the men’s 100 metre race!
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Rachel O'Neill
8/27/2018 01:59:09 am

Well thought out plot line here, Jack. I'm also impressed by your confident use of the semi colon! A good piece of writing which catches you up in the character's feelings and thoughts.

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